| <The Process of Taking an Airplane>
Jean Park
The process that I'd like to explain is how to take an airplane. It might sound too simple and easy to give such a description, however, actually there are lots of people who are confused and waste their time not knowing what to do. To prevent these happenings, I'll mention few steps of what people should do when they're arrived at airport to ride an airplane. First, check your destination, flight number, time and your airline counter through the screens in the airport. Then go to the counter and get the boarding pass and send away big suitcases. One thing you should be aware is that there's limited weight of each luggages depends on the airlines, the class of tickets etc. After finishing the check-in step, security checks is waiting for you. Make sure not to carry any banned objects such as knife, lighter or liquids over 50 milliliters. If you passed the security checks safely, the last important step, immigration is left. Immigration is the process that's checking your departure and know when and where you are leaving. Sometimes, the officers might ask you a questions, do not get in panic but answer honestly with calm mind. These are the main process to go abroad by taking an airplane and you can enjoy shopping at the duty free shops or wait in front of the boarding gate, whatever your minds go. I hope my explanation would help the people who had not know the exact processes going on at the airport. |
Thursday, May 3, 2012
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Hi~ I'm Joan.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your writing. It's really helpful for borders who have to take an airplane soon. Your wrote in easy, clear way by dividing into numbers. However, your first sentence seemed to talk about how to take an airplane. But the whole paragraph was focused on accessing before getting into plane. So, changing your first topic sentence to fit your paragraph will lessen any confusions made.
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ReplyDeleteThe process that I'd like to explain is the steps to follow in the airport before getting into an airplane. It might sound too simple and easy to give such a description, however, actually there are lots of people who are confused and waste their time not knowing what to do. To prevent these happenings, I'll mention a few steps of what people should do when they're arrived at airport to ride an airplane. First, check your destination, flight number, time and your airline counter through the screens in the airport. Then go to the counter and get the boarding pass and send away big suitcases. One thing you should aware is that there's limited weight of each luggages depends on the airlines, the class of tickets, so be sure to not overweight the certain kilograms. After finishing the check-in step, security checks are waiting for you. Make sure not to carry any banned objects such as knife, lighter or liquids over 50 milliliters. If you passed the security checks safely, the last important step, immigration is left. Immigration is the process that's checking your departure and know when and where you are leaving. Sometimes, the officers might ask you a questions, do not get in panic but answer honestly with calm mind. These are the main processes to go abroad in an airport and you can enjoy shopping at the duty free shops or wait in front of the boarding gates, whatever your minds go. I hope my explanation helped the people who had not know the exact steps to taken at the airport.