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When mid-term is over, a lot of students go to membership training, which is called MT. Every year, freshmen enter universities and they experience MT. However, they have a hard time because they don't know how to prepare for MT themselves. When preparing, they always forget one or two things. So these are the steps that will make your MT well prepared. First, you have to discuss the budget. The money that friends pay for is very important because you have to deal with accomodations to food with the money. Second, make reservations, but you have to be careful. Check thoroughly whether the hotel you're looking for has good facility. Also check the transportation because if the hotel is too far, people would get exhausted. Next, call the owner of the hotel and tell the owner the date and time of your arrival so that the owner can pick you up. Then, check if there is a mart or store to buy food and beverages nearby the hotel. If there isn't any, you have to buy those things before departure. Lastly, decide the meeting time and place with your friends and have a nice MT! |
Friday, May 4, 2012
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Hi. It was a good piece of writing. What I like about it is that it has tie order words to help me clarify the steps. Also this information is surly useful for those who are not familiar with MT culture. However, there are some awkward grammatical mistakes or vocabs. You would better use "by themselves" etc... Overall, nice paragraph!
ReplyDeleteHello, this is Park Tae Jun. Overall, your paragraph was easy to follow because it was written clearly. ALso, your writing follows the order of time, thus it's easy to read. Since MT is an event that most of university freshmen experience, this steps would help them to prepare for the MT pretty well. Your writing would be better if some grammartical errors are fixed, and to me, the introductory part of the writing seems a little bit long; with more detailed steps may strengthen the writing.
ReplyDeleteWhen mid-term is over, a lot of students go to membership training, which is called MT. Every year, freshmen enter universities and they experience MT. However, they have a hard time because they don't know how to prepare for MT by themselves. When preparing, they always forget one or two things. So these are the steps that will make your MT well prepared. First, you have to discuss the budget. The money that friends pay for is very important because you have to deal with accomodations to food with the money. Second, make reservations, but you have to be careful. Check thoroughly whether the hotel you're looking for has good facility. Also check the transportation because if the hotel is too far, people would get exhausted. Next, call the owner of the hotel and tell the owner the date and time of your arrival so that the owner can pick you up. Then, check if there is a mart or store to buy food and beverages nearby the hotel. If there isn't any, you have to buy those things before departure. Lastly, decide the meeting time and place with your friends and have a nice MT!
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