Thursday, May 3, 2012

YoungHoon Kim / Process Paragraph / Mon 11a.m.

How to Reserve Ticket for Baseball

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           Spring has come and the baseball season began! Are you excited to see the baseball games? Before you enjoy watching games at the stadium, there is something you should do in advance. You need to reserve ticket for good seats. These days, internet reservation is most common, so I'll explain you how to make a reservation online. First, go to the internet site named "Ticket Link"(www.ticketlink.co.kr). Second, click "2012 Baseball" and go to the site of reservation. Third, choose the dates and teams that you want to watch. Fourth, choose the grade of your seat among Blue, Red and Yellow. Blue is the most expensive and Yellow is the cheapest. Fifth, select the side of your seat between the first base side and the third base side. In Jamsil Baseball stadium, the first base side is for home team fans and the third base side is for away team fans. Of course, you can choose outfield seats. Sixth, choose whether you select your seat by yourself or automatically by computer. Last, pay the ticket by credit card or account transfer. Then you will see your reservation number and finally the reservation is completed. It looks a bit complicated at first, but you will be accustomed to it soon. Now, be ready to cheer and enjoy your baseball game!

3 comments:

  1. Hi, this is Youna Lee.
    What I liked about your writng is that it is greatly organized. So I can clearly understand the order of each step. I especially liked that you clarify each step by using time order words such as first, second, and third. However, I think you need more background information to fully explain your process. Some people may not know about baseball well. So if there were more explanations about such as where is the best seats to watch the game, it would be perfect.
    Overall, I loved your writing piece. I like baseball too.
    Thank you!

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  2. Hi~ I'm Joan.
    I like your step by step explanations about reserving baseball tickets. With specific numberings, anyone can easily follow. However, as mentioned in the upper comment, people who don't have knowledge about baseball like me can be confused.Even your writing was clear, it would've been better if you explained detaily about the baseball terms. Anyway, it was an interesting topic and I want to go to see baseball by reading your paragraph:)

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  3. Spring has come and the baseball season began! Are you excited to see the baseball games? Before you enjoy watching games at the stadium, there is something you should do in advance. You need to reserve the ticket for good seats. These days, internet reservation is most common, so I’ll explain you how to make a reservation online. First, go to the internet site named “Ticket Link”(www.ticketlink.co.kr). Second, click “2012 Baseball” and go to the site of reservation. Third, choose the dates and teams that you want to watch. Fourth, choose the grade of your seat among Blue, Red and Yellow. Blue is the most expensive and Yellow is the cheapest. If you want to watch players in a short distance, choose Blue. If you want to watch cheerleaders dancing and the match at the same time, choose Red. Fifth, select the side of your seat between the first base side which is right side from the home base and the third base side which is left side of home base. In Jamsil Baseball stadium, the first base side is for home team fans and the third base side is for away team fans. Of course, you can choose outfield seats which are cheaper than the first base side seats or third base side seats. Sixth, choose whether you select your seats by yourself or automatically by computer. If you choose your seats by yourself, the seats that you selected are valid for 5 minutes so you need to pay within 5 minutes. Last, pay the ticket by credit card or account transfer. Then you will see your reservation number and finally the reservation is completed. It looks a bit complicated at first, but you will be accustomed to it soon. Now, be ready to cheer and enjoy your baseball game!

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