Steps for Special Gift
Many people often have a hard time deciding what kind of gifts to give to their lovers, because there are millions of choices for gifts. Here are easy steps to choose the right and satisfying gift for someone you love, for example, girl friend. First of all, try to come up with a list of things your girl friend has wanted to buy. If you have paid attention to what she said, it would not be difficult to come up with the list. Then, check the budget limit that you can spend for the gift. Don't buy items that are over the budget, because you need extra money for dates. Then, surf the internet or visit stores to know price for items on your list. Delete the items on the list that are over your budget. If you end up having two or three items left on the list and still can't decide on what to buy, ask friends of your girl friend, if you know one of them, which one would be better. Finally, buy the gift and make sure to have it wrapped with your hand written letter. Following this easy step definitely will make your girl friend delighted.
Your writing is great! All the steps are well related to the topic sentence. Also there are appropriate time order words to make informationa clear. However, it would be better if you shorten third sentence to the last. Overall, the writing is well organized and full of helpful advice.
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ReplyDeleteI liked your writing because this writing is specifically for the ones who are going to buy a gift for their lovers. There are specific steps and they are well organized. Wrapping with hand written letter was the best idea and I liked it. If there were a couple of your personal experience to back up the process, if would be much better.
Many people often have a hard time deciding what kind of gifts to give to their lovers. It’s simply because there are millions of choices for gifts. Here are easy steps to choose the right and satisfying gift for someone you love, for example, your girl friend. First of all, try to come up with a list of things your girl friend wanted to buy. If you have paid attention to what she says, it would not be difficult to come up with the list. Then, check the budget limit that you can spend for the gift. Don't buy items that are over the budget, because you need extra money for dates. Then, surf the internet or visit stores to know price for the items on your list. Delete the items that are over your budget. If you end up having two or three items left on the list and still can't decide on what to buy, ask friends of your girl friend, if you know anyone of them, to suggest which one would be better. Finally, buy the gift and make sure to have it wrapped with your hand written letter. I know these steps because I always followed the steps and ended up choosing the best gifts. Following this easy step definitely will make your girl friend delighted.
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