How to make chocolate
For special days like Valentine's day or Christmas, it is nice to give a hand-made presents like a chocolate. It is not that hard and most importantly can be a great gift. It is high recommendable to make by oneself rather than buying in a convenience store. First, melt dark and white chocolate. It is important to cook in a double boiler because directly melted chocolate will be burned. Next, pour melted chocolate to a mold. It is also a good idea to put peanuts or walnuts. After that, it's time for cooling down. It is recommended to cool it down in a room temperature for more than a hour. However, if there is not enough time, it is also okay to put it in a freezer for about 30 minutes. Finally, it is done. Likewise, making chocolate does not take much time nor money. However, when you give it to people you love such as family, friends and lovers, they will feel how much you care about them and will be touched. So try this at home for the coming Parents' day and Teachers' day.
Hi. What I like about your writing is that it contains very helpful information about how to make chocolate. You explained it well! However, I think it would be much easily understood if you say "highly recommended." Also "Finally it's done." is actually unnecessary so you should replace with another that has same meaning. Overall, great writing.
ReplyDeleteHi! This is YoungHoon Kim. Your writing was organized and easy to understand. What I like the most about your writing was that you explained advantages of making chocolate by ourselves so that made us give it a try. Also, you used signal words that shows process and it made me follow your writing. But it was a little bit simple. It would have been better if you added more tips. Anyway it was a good piece of writing!
ReplyDeleteFor special days like Valentine's day or Christmas, it is nice to give a hand-made presents like a chocolate. It is not that hard and most importantly can be a great gift. It is high recommended to make by oneself rather than buying in a convenience store. First, melt dark and white chocolate together. It is important to cook in a double boiler because directly melted chocolate will be burned. Next, pour melted chocolate to a mold. To make a special shaped chocolate, you can preapre a mold that is heart, star or bear shaped. It is also a good idea to put peanuts or walnuts. After that, it's time for cooling down. It is recommended to cool it down in a room temperature for more than a hour. However, if there is not enough time, it is also okay to put it in a freezer for about 30 minutes. Finally, it is done. Likewise, making chocolate does not take much time nor money. However, when you give it to people you love such as family, friends and lovers, they will feel how much you care about them and will be touched. So try this at home for the coming Parents' day and Teachers' day.
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