The Best Job For Me
Since I was young, I wanted to become a salaried worker. I just thought that job was cool and interesting. However, as I grew older, I noticed that choosing a job was a serious business. I had to think about what I like and also what I am good at. Then, I realized that I was not a salaried worker type person. So I changed my mind and dreamed of becoming a teacher which I believe is the best job for me. First, I feel satisfied and proud when I teach others and help them to learn something. Once, I worked as a teaching assistant in an English institute near my house. At first, I just applied for some pocket money, but after, I soon felt proud and satisfied when the students asked me questions after class and got help with their grades. I realized that this field might be the right choice when choosing a job in the future. Moreover, I prefer easy and comfortable working atmosphere. In companies, especially in Korea, there is some kind of wall among workers and their boss. For me, I feel oppressed in such an environment and cannot do my work. However, in institutes, as they spend much time with students and younger teaching assistants, they have much younger mind and do not assume a haughty attitude. This is also why I specifically think institute teacher fits me well, not school teachers. I think I am lucky as I found what kind of job fits me well in a comparatively young age. To become a good educator, I will work hard and focus on visualizing my dream from now.
Hi, I enjoyed reading your opinion paragraph. I thought it's very well organized and logical writing. All the points you wanted to express was so clear and details were also good. It was interesting to know that you want to be an institute teacher, not a school teacher. However, just to give some little feebacks, I think some words are little ackward in few places. If you fix this, it will be perfect!
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ReplyDeleteI liked reading your paragraph because it has many specific reasons why institute teacher is the perfect job for you. I especially think the parts you wrote your own experiences were good.They worked as strong reasons. Also, it was very specific that you chose 'instite teacher', not just any teacher.
Since I was young, I wanted to become a salaried worker. I just thought that job was cool and interesting. However, as I grew older, I noticed that choosing a job was a serious business. I had to think about what I like and also what I am good at. Then, I realized that I was not a salaried worker type person. So I changed my mind and dreamed of becoming a teacher which I believe is the best job for me. First, I feel satisfied and proud when I teach others and help them to learn something. Once, I worked as a teaching assistant in an English institute near my house. At first, I just applied for some pocket money, but after, I soon felt proud and satisfied when the students asked me questions after class and got help with their grades. I realized that this field might be the right choice when choosing a job in the future. Moreover, I prefer easy and comfortable working atmosphere. In companies, especially in Korea, there is some kind of wall among workers and their boss. For me, I feel oppressed in such an environment and cannot make my best results. However, in institutes, as they spend much time with students and younger teaching assistants, they are much open-minded and do not assume a haughty attitude. This is also why I specifically think institute teacher fits me well, not school teachers. I think I am lucky as I found what kind of job fits me well in a comparatively young age. To become a good educator, I will work hard and focus on visualizing my dream from now.
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