<How to clean your room>
How often do you clean your room? Maybe not frequently. Because it is an annoying thing for busy modern people, like you. After reading this paragraph, however, your thought will change. First, open the windows. When cleaning, your room gets dusty. Opening the windows helps the dust not to float in the air and enter your nostril and mouth. Second, prepare one big box or bag to dejunk(to clean your room or office while wasting what you don't use). Look around your desk, rack, bookshelf, drawers, and closet and find what you don't use anymore. Then, put them into the containers. Do not hesitate to throw out your stuff. Third, arrange everything in your room such as books, clothes, and bedding. For example, arranging your books alphabetically on the shelf is useful for you to find the book that you need. Also, putting your clothes in order by their colors makes your place look neat and tidy. Then, you have to wipe the dust. Sweep or vacuum the floor with your broom. After doing this, you mop the floor clean. And dust down every nook and corner in your room with new dust cloth. Dust will be removed perfectly. Finally, spray some air freshener to not also get rid of bad smell but also clean you feeling! Don't forget to close the window after cleaning.
Hello my name is NaYeon Kwon. What I like about your writing is that your topic is very clear. Moreover, I think it's a very interesting topic! The flow seems good as well. However, I find some sentences hard to understnand like the last sentence 'spray some air freshener to not also get rid of bad smell~'.
ReplyDeleteMaybe if you rephrase the sentence, it would be easier to understand what you mean by that. Other than that, it was nice :)