Make-up tutorial
Da-hyun Yang
Many people are worried about how they look today, thus make-up is important to them. Therefore I will introduce 'simply' how to make-up on your face. First of all, start with a clearly washed face and also hands. Then apply toner by taking a cotton pad and moisturizer into your face. And the most important thing is that now you have to apply a sun block to protect yourself from the sun. Second, apply a sheer foundation that matches your skin tone. Remember to apply this way down to your throat so you can not see where the make up ends. Then, apply a loose powder all over the face using a powder brush. Thirdly, line your eyes and put on the eye shadow. Also don't forget to use eyebrow pencil color which is close to your hair color. Fill in missing areas with it. And lastly to the eyes, use a lash curler before applying any mascara. Do both eyes with two coats and after a few seconds do the bottom lids. Finally, apply lip balm on your lip, because this will help make lip stick applied last longer. And then apply lipstick or lip gloss. All these processes are just the basic of make-up. and there are lots of various ways to make-up our face. I also think that make-up is important and sometimes necessary nowadays. But I hope everyone become realize that they are pretty enough whether they make-up or not.
Hello Dahyun, I'm Hakyung Chin.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this piece of writing.
What I liked the most is the last part. "But I hope everyone become realize that they are pretty enough whether they make-up or not."
This piece of writing if really simple and helpful, though it is a little difficult to learn to put on make-up just by reading.
I liked the writing overall, but I think it might make it more clear if you changed 'make-up' to 'put on/apply make-up'
Thank you! ;)
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ReplyDeleteMake-up tutorial
Da-hyun Yang
Many people are worried about how they look today, thus make-up is important to them. Therefore I will introduce 'simply' how to put on a make-up on your face. First of all, start with a clearly washed face and also hands. Then apply toner by taking a cotton pad and moisturizer into your face. And the most important thing is that now you have to apply a sun block to protect yourself from the sun. Second, apply a sheer foundation that matches your skin tone. Remember to apply this way down to your throat so you can not see where the make up ends. Then, apply a loose powder all over the face using a powder brush. Thirdly, line your eyes and put on the eye shadow. Also don't forget to use eyebrow pencil color which is close to your hair color. Fill in missing areas with it. And lastly to the eyes, use a lash curler before applying a mascara. Do both eyes with two coats and after a few seconds do the bottom lids. Finally, apply lip balm on your lip, because this will help make lip stick applied last longer. And then apply lipstick or lip gloss. All these processes are just the basics of make-up and there are various ways of applying make-up. I also think that make-up is important and sometimes necessary nowadays. But I hope everyone become realize that they are pretty enough whether they apply a make-up or not.