TV: Could you live without it?
201100960 Han Byol Kim
My father, mother, younger sister, my cousin and I live together. Except my father, four of us are big fans of a few of television shows. On every Monday and Tuesday, my mother, cousin and I watch a drama called '초한지'. My sister has a different drama taste but since our family has only one television, my younger sister goes into her room and watch a drama named 'Dream High season 2' with DMB. After finish watching the dramas, together we watch a TV show called '안녕하세요'. It is a TV show which four MCs and several guests emceeing the show by listening to people's worries. On Saturday, we watch a TV show '무한도전'. It is one of my favorite TV shows. It a comedy TV show where seven men come out and do some comedy. On a next day, Sunday, at 9'o clock we watch a comedy program 'Gag Concert'. My father, who does not enjoy watching comedy programs, watches this one with rest of us. Not only myself but also my family enjoy watching TV. Watching TV is fun and it provides me with kind of a break time by making me laugh. Also TV programs work as a topic of conversation among my family. We share each other's personal opinion when watching it or after it is finished. So, as you can see, I cannot live without TV!
Hi My name is YoungHoon Kim. I think your specific examples are good. But some of the examples are written in Korean. It will make people who don't know Korean hard to read your wrting. It was nice reading your paragraph.
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is Kyeong-eun Lee. It was very interesting to read your essay about TV. It seems very enjoyable to watch TV drama or comedy shows together and to share them as topics in your famaily. And because of this, it makes reasonable why you like watching TV. However, it would be more clear if your controlling idea was in the first sentence. Besides this, your whole story was good.
ReplyDeleteThis is Han Byol Kim. I thought I posted the revised version of my writing but it did not uploaded into this blog. Sorry for turning my writing late.
ReplyDeleteI cannot live without TV. It will be a long story to explain why I cannot live without it. In order to tell why, first I need to introduce my family members. My father, mother, younger sister, my cousin and I live together. Except my father, four of us are big fans of a few of television shows. On every Monday and Tuesday, my mother, cousin and I watch a drama called ' Cho Han Zi'초한지. My sister has a different drama taste but since our family has only one television, my younger sister goes into her room and watch a drama named 'Dream High season 2' with DMB. After finish watching the dramas, together we watch a TV show called 'An neyoung ha sae yo안녕하세요'. It is a TV show which four MCs and several guests emceeing the show by listening to people's worries. On Saturday, we watch a TV show 'Mu han do zoen무한도전'. It is one of my favorite TV shows. It a comedy TV show where seven men come out and do some comedy. On a next day, Sunday, at 9'o clock we watch a comedy program 'Gag Concert'. My father, who does not enjoy watching comedy programs, watches this one with rest of us. Not only myself but also my family enjoy watching TV. Watching TV is fun and it provides me with kind of a break time by making me laugh. Also TV programs work as a topic of conversation among my family. We share each other's personal opinion when watching it or after it is finished. So, as you can see, I cannot live without TV!