"Angel In Us" coffee-shop in front of my house.
Because I cannot concentrate well at my place, I tend to go to coffee-shop or library when I have assignments. As I go there often ordering the same coffee everytime, two part-time workers know me. Both of them are around 20s. I don't like coffee that much but I love its scent. As soon as I open the door, I can immediately feel the fresh and delicate scent of coffee. I always order the same thing, a green tea latte. I like the color, smell and also the taste. Like I said, I don't drink coffee that often and I also don't like sweet things either, there aren't many choice for me to pick. However, the green tea latte is the perfect choice for me. The coffee-shop is quite big. However, there aren't usually many people and the music is very quiet which makes the atmosphere very calm. There are various kinds of magazines, so when I take a break for a moment, I read those. Sometimes, I do my assignments for hours there having two or three lattes.
Hello, it was good to read your writing piece.:)
ReplyDeleteWhat I like about this piece of writing is that you described well why you like green tea latte and 'Angel in us ' coffee shop with appropriate and live words. And your main point seems to be the reasons why you love that coffeeshop and green taa latte.
I like the sentence 'two part-time workers know me'. Because it expresses how you like that coffee shop in a new way. However the word in first sentence 'my place' is not clear to me. It would be perfect if you change it into more specific word. And also, it would be much better if you describe the coffee shop interior in more detail and delete some repeating sentences and arrange those well.
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Because I cannot concentrate well at my house, I tend to go to coffee-shop or library when I have assignments. As I go there often ordering the same coffee everytime, two part-time workers know me. Both of them are around 20s. I don't like coffee that much but I love its scent. As soon as I open the door, I can immediately feel the fresh and delicate scent of coffee. I always order the same thing, a green tea latte. Like I said, I don't drink coffee that often and I also don't like sweet things either, there aren't many choice for me to pick. However, the green tea latte is the perfect choice for me. The coffee-shop is quite big. There are about 15 tables and the most of the furnitures and the walls are white and yellow. There aren't usually many people and the music is very quiet which makes the atmosphere very calm. There are various kinds of magazines, so when I take a break for a momment, I read those. Sometimes, I do my assignments for hours there having two or three lattes.
ReplyDeleteI like your writing explaning specifically about your love of grean tea latte. Also, as you corrected above, interior details were lacking. To add more, describing the workers you mentioned about their appearances would make it vivid like i'm in "Angel-in-us"
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