| TV: Could you live without it?
These days, it is so clear that people watch TV a lot. TV has actually become a part of our lives. People make conversations related to TV programs and it has become quite a big deal to know what was on TV yesterday. Of course due to the increase of time that people watch TV, it has become very controversial. Some parents even try to stop their kids from watching TV because kids these days are quite obsessed with TV programs. Most parents take this seriously because watching TV too much could harm their children's education. However, I think we can never live without TV. It's true that TV is only for watching, you can't make dramas and send it on TV just like you do it on the Internet, but TV is as powerful as the Internet. TV programs allure people so much that the first thing we talk about when we meet ours friends is "yesterday's drama". TV is also important in our lives because we can get crucial information on the news. It's like a reminder of daily circumstances. TV still has the biggest power in the media because TV also sends public announcements from the president or the government. People watch them because it's reliable. It's not just a screen that sends images. It's a powerful tool that people can never live without. |
Wednesday, March 14, 2012
Oh You Jeong/TV: Could you live without it?/Mon11AM
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Hello, my name is Park Tae Jun and I really liked reading your writing. You made a powerful argument that people can't live without TV. I liked the concluding sentence "It's a powerful tool that people can never live without", because it provides a striking impression on your conclusion. Your writing overall flows well and has its consistency. It would be better if you could erase some sentences about parents stopping their children from watching TV, because it seems a little out of point you are making. However, overall the writing was good!
ReplyDeleteThese days, it is so clear that people watch TV a lot. TV has actually become a part of our lives. People make conversations related to TV programs and it has become quite a big deal to know what was on TV yesterday. Of course due to the increase of time that people watch TV, it has become very controversial. However, I think we can never live without TV. It's true that TV is only for watching, you can't make dramas and send it on TV just like you do it on the Internet, but TV is as powerful as the Internet. TV programs allure people so much that the first thing we talk about when we meet ours friends is "yesterday's drama". TV is also important in our lives because we can get crucial information on the news. It's like a reminder of daily circumstances. TV still has the biggest power in the media because TV also sends public announcements from the president or the government. People watch them because it's reliable. It's not just a screen that sends images. It's a powerful tool that people can never live without.
ReplyDeleteHello, You jeong.
ReplyDeleteI am Hakyung Chin.
What I like about your piece of writing is that you speak firmly on your thoughts.
However, I think it is weak on backflashes.
Thank you