| Nowadays television plays an important role in our lives. I also love watching television since I was young. When I was in elementary school, I always watched TV after I came back from school. Unlike any other parents, my parents allowed me to watch it every day. When I lived in the United States, I learned English by watching cartoon such as 'Spongebob.' The story was easy to understand and it did help to improve my listening skill. During high school years, I couldn't spend time watching television as much as I did before. I usually watched it during in weekends. There are two ways how television has good effect on me. First, I can enjoy different kinds of programs. Among many, I mostly watch news and drama. Also since I prefer television to computer, I usually get knowledge through TV about how world is going on. When I meet my friends, I like to talk about recent dramas. Sometimes I even watch cooking channel with my mother and sports game with my father. Secondly, watching television is the only time I can truly take a rest. For example, I used to watch television whenever I was having a problem solving math problems. Especially when I watch variety show programs, I could get rid of my stress by laughing. Therefore I can't imagine my lives without TV. |
Thursday, March 15, 2012
Ji Eun Lee/ TV, could you live without it? / Mon 11a.m.
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Hi, my name is Kyeong-eun Lee. I enjoyed your essay on TV as it contains lots of your "story". The story about "Spongebob" helped me understand the reason you like watching TV. Yet, you refered the two ways how television has good effect on you in the middle of the whole writing -- and it seems unorganized as it is unclear which part in your writing is topic. But in generally, your writing was interesting.
ReplyDeleteTV, could you live without it? (second draft)
DeleteNowadays television plays an important role in our lives. I also love watching television since I was young. When I was in elementary school, I always watched TV after I came back from school. Unlike any other parents, my parents allowed me to watch it every day. When I lived in the United States, I learned English by watching cartoon such as ‘Spongebob.’ The story was easy to understand and it did help to improve my listening skill. During high school years, I couldn’t spend time watching television as much as I did before. I usually watched it during in weekends. After a week of hard studying, watching television in weekends was the only time I could truly take a rest. Especially when I watched variety show programs, I could get rid of my stress by laughing aloud. In conclusion, television has been always with me for over 20 years, and therefore I can’t imagine my lives without TV.
TV, could you live without it? (second draft- there was a mistake that I put it as a reply)
ReplyDeleteNowadays television plays an important role in our lives. I also love watching television since I was young. When I was in elementary school, I always watched TV after I came back from school. Unlike any other parents, my parents allowed me to watch it every day. When I lived in the United States, I learned English by watching cartoon such as ‘Spongebob.’ The story was easy to understand and it did help to improve my listening skill. During high school years, I couldn’t spend time watching television as much as I did before. I usually watched it during in weekends. After a week of hard studying, watching television in weekends was the only time I could truly take a rest. Especially when I watched variety show programs, I could get rid of my stress by laughing aloud. In conclusion, television has been always with me for over 20 years, and therefore I can’t imagine my lives without TV.