During my life, there has been TV beside me. I used to watch many cartoons when I was little. Every Sunday morning, I woke up early and watched "Disney's Cartoon World" which began at 8 a.m. It was a routine for me and friends around me always talked about it. When I got older, I started to play video games with my friends. With video games, we had so much fun that we sometimes lost all track of time. In 2002, World Cup was held in Korea. Whenever the Korean match was scheduled, many people gathered in front of big TV screen to watch games. I was one of the people in the crowd and I still remember the feeling and passion I had at that time. When I was in middle school and high school, I was under pressure to study a lot. After schools and academies, I could relieve my stress by watching dramas and sports games. Nowadays, I don't watch TV as much as before because I have smart phone and laptop that have the function of TV. But, I believe TV is still necessary for me. This is because I like to watch movies in a big screen and I love to watch comedies with people around me that I can laugh together. Since TV has been located so deep inside my life, imaging that there is no TV is nightmare to me.
Thursday, March 15, 2012
YoungHoon Kim / TV: Could you live without it? / Mon 11a.m.
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What I like about this piece of writing is that there are many specific experiences about tv so that it was really interesting to read. And it was easy to follow because you wrote the paragraph as time flows. Especially I like the last sentence. Because it make me know about your opinion again clearly.
But I think you missed some articles in your writing. It is not a big deal i think but once I recognized this fact, it little bit irritates me to read. For example, you can change some phrases to 'tv screen to watch the games' or 'when i was in the middle school'.
But for this tiny mistakes it was really interesting to read your writing. thank you !
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ReplyDeleteFrom KyoungMin Kim
I like this writing becuase it shows good effects of TV very lively. I like specific details such thing as you woke up early to watch "Disney's Cartoon World", and the cheering in front of the TV during the Worldcup season. I think the main point is that TV gives you energy, things to talk about with friends, and the bondings between others by watching it, and you won't be able to live your life without watching TV.
One thing that I suggest you to change is that you might want to remove the sentence "When I got older, I started to play video games with my friends. With video games, we had so much fun that we sometimes lost all track of time.". I think the sentence doens't go well with the topic of the paragraph(TV).
Enjoyed your writing, thanks!
During my life, there has been TV beside me. I used to watch many cartoons when I was little. Every Sunday morning, I woke up early and watched "Disney's Cartoon World" which began at 8 a.m. It was a routine for me and friends around me always talked about it. When I got older, I started to play the video games which need connection to TV with my friends. With video games, we had so much fun that we sometimes lost all track of time. In 2002, World Cup was held in Korea. Whenever the Korean match was scheduled, many people gathered in front of a big TV screen to watch the games. I was one of the people in the crowd and I still remember the feeling and passion I had at that time. When I was in the middle school and the high school, I was under pressure to study a lot. After schools and academies, I could relieve my stress by watching dramas and sports games. Nowadays, I don't watch TV as much as before because I have smart phone and laptop that have the function of TV. But, I believe TV is still necessary for me. This is because I like to watch movies in a big screen and I love to watch comedies with people around me that I can laugh together. Since TV has been located so deep inside my life, imaging that there is no TV is a nightmare to me.
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