It is almost impossible to live without TV these days. First of all, watching news is one of the most important and effective way of knowing current affairs in the society. In a busy society like nowadays, it's crucial for people to know not only domestic but also international issues to have a better understanding of major issues happening in the society that we live in. Without TV, it's difficult to watch news and know current affairs. Also, TV is a great tool to let people have good relationships with others. People can talk about dramas, shows and programs that they saw through TV. If one doesn't have TV and couldn't watch those programs, he or she will feel isolated because doesn't know anything about what others' are talking. Finally, watching TV gives people feeling of rest. Many people love to lie on a sofa and watch TV after getting back from work, because they feel it's the best way to take a rest. For them, time for watching TV is the most relaxing moment of a day and it gives them energy to start a fresh new day. Therefore, it is hard to imagine live without TV.
Hi! great writing!
ReplyDeleteI liked it because it gives three main reasons why television plays an important role for people. The main point seems to argue that people can't live without TV because it offers knowledge and joy. I really liked the line that says "the most relaxing moment of a day ~." It is well explaining the best rest that TV offers to us. However, your writing would have been better if you added your own personal examples. If that so, the writing would be more detailed and impressive. Also you need to correct some grammatical errors.
It is almost impossible to live without TV these days. First of all, watching news is one of the most important and effective way of knowing current affairs in the society. In a busy society like nowadays, it’s crucial for people to know not only domestic but also international issues to have a better understanding of major issues happening in the society. Without TV, it’s difficult to watch news and know current affairs. I try to watch news everyday because it gives me an understanding what’s hot in the society these days. Also, TV is a great tool to let people have good relationships with others. People can talk about dramas, shows and programs that they saw through TV. If one doesn’t have TV and couldn’t watch those programs, he or she would feel isolated because doesn’t know anything about what others’ are talking about. Finally, watching TV gives people feeling of rest. Many people love to lie on a sofa and watch TV after getting back from work, because they feel it’s the best way to take a rest. For them, time for watching TV is the most relaxing moment of a day and it gives them energy to start a fresh new day. For family, it’s the best time to gather around and have little talks while watching TV. Therefore, it is hard to imagine live without TV.
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