The place that I'm going to describe is located in the fourth floor of globee dorm at hufs. I have to walk along the hallway where most of the time there's full of smell of cigarette to get to that place. At the end of the hallway, there's a door of room, number 438, which is the room of 'Hufs Philharmonic Orchestra'. The door is always locked that only could open the person who knows its secret number. As opening, I face a table which is huge enough that four or five people can use at the same time. That table is very useful in many ways like doing homework, having conversation or sometimes discussing things. It's made of wood and incredibly heavy. I once tried to move it to other place with my friend and it was just like a hell. As it's the room for orchestra, there are plenty of musical instruments like violins, flutes, cellos, bases… and also full of dusts that the whole room smells like dusty. There's also a piano whose color is black and its sound is pretty good. Whenever I touch the piano keys, they are very light and the sound is so clear that I often enjoy refreshing my feeling with playing this piano. There's also a huge window at the wall. I can see some buildings of campus through this window. Some people once scribbled on this window with red pen and it's pretty funny to look at it.
Hi, this is Park,Hee-june. What I like about your writing is that your feelings are expressed well. I can imagine it. But I can't understand a phrase: "I once tried to move it to other place with my friend and it was just like a hell." I want to know where the place is and why you move to that place. I'm just curious. Have a nice weekends :)
ReplyDeleteHi. I liked your writing because the sense of sight and smell is well described in it. I can vividly imagine the exact room that your are trying to explain to us. However, if you had added some details such as how big the room is and why it is your special place, the writing could be more impressive. Overall, it was great !
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ReplyDeleteThe place that I'm going to describe is located in the fourth floor of globee dorm at hufs. I have to walk along the hallway where most of the time there's full of smell of cigarette to get to that place. At the end of the hallway, there's a door of room, number 438, which is the room of 'Hufs Philharmonic Orchestra'. The door is always locked that only could open the person who knows its secret number. As opening, I face a table which is huge enough that four or five people can use at the same time. That table is very useful in many ways like doing homework, having conversation or sometimes discussing things. It's made of wood and incredibly heavy. I once moved it to outside long time ago with my friend because we had to introduce our club to people outside and we needed the table. But it was horribly heavy that I was so tired.
As it's the room for orchestra, there are plenty of musical instruments like violins, flutes, cellos, bases… and also full of dusts that the whole room smells like dusty. There's also a piano whose color is black and its sound is pretty good. Whenever I touch the piano keys, they are very light and the sound is so clear that I often enjoy refreshing my feeling with playing this piano. There's also a huge window at the wall. I can see some buildings of campus through this window. Some people once scribbled on this window with red pen and it's pretty funny to look at it. I like this place because whenever I have a free time and nothing to do, I simply can go there and pass the time.