Most of my friends' hobby is to watch drama and to talk about that. On weekends, if they don't have any appointment, they keep their seats, in front of television. But watching TV a lot is wasting time. TV is a tool for convenient communication between nations and nations, peoples and peoples. However, for real communication, seeing each other is the best way. We have to meet people, talk each other, and hug them. That is, watching TV all day long is one-sided communication, because we do not talk each other, but we just accept information. That's the reason why we do not watch TV much.
My name is Nayeon Kwon. What I liked about this writing was that I can see your opinion about watching Tv very easily. Your main point seems to be watchng TV is a waste of time.However, because you seem to use too much strict words which makes the writing a bit agressive. I don't understand what Tv is a tool for communication between nations and nations. I think if you keep this in mind, it would be better :)
ReplyDeleteWhat I like about this paragraph was that you emphasized communication as main reason for watching TV. You tried to tell there are other ways to communicate with people from all around the world so we don't need TV. However I think it would have been better if you explained more reason except the communication part. Other than that, I think it's great.
ReplyDeleteMost of my friends' hobby is to watch drama and to talk about that. On weekends, if they don't have any appointment, they keep their seats, in front of television. But watching TV a lot is wasting time. I mean, watching TV is good, but if you spend too much time, that's non-sense. TV is a tool for convenient communication between nations and nations, peoples and peoples. For example, we can be offered the weather condition or more serious things like election, changing laws, war etc. However, for real communication, seeing each other is the best way. We have to meet people, talk each other, and hug them. That is, watching TV all day long is one-sided communication, because we do not talk each other, but we just accept information. That's the reason why we do not watch TV much.
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