| <My Dearest Sister>
201101481 Jean Park
My favorite relative is my cousin Ji Yeon. Even though she's 10 years older than me, I feel like she's my real sister and also a best friend. The reason why I feel so close to her is that because I lived with her since I was born. Both of my parents had their job so I was raised in my aunt's house. I lived at there Monday to Friday and my parents took me in the weekends. Thus, I spent a lot of time with my aunt's family including my cousin Ji Yeon. Since our age gap was big, we never fought but she treated me like a little sister that she needs to take care. She changed my diapers, washed me and brought me to home when the kindergarten was finished. If I think back, she looked after me like a mother and still she always contacts me and takes care of me. Furthermore, not only she acted like a mother but also she was an good advisor and a playmate. I really enjoyed telling her about my latest worries and thoughts about specific subjects. For instance, I only have a younger brother so it was hard for me to share my personal concerns with him. Although, with my cousin, we used to go to hot spa and spent a night at there chatting and talk about celebrities' gossips. In addition, since she was much older than me, she always gave me a helpful advise to go through the difficult periods of my life. Now, she's married and has her own family so we cannot see each other that often like we used to in the past. However Ji Yeon is still my favorite cousin and my precious sister whom I rely a lot. |
Thursday, April 26, 2012
Jean Park/ My Dearest Sister/ Mon34
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Hi. I'm Oh You Jeong
ReplyDeleteI think you love your cousin a lot. I could feel that in your story. You and your cousin spent a lot of precious time together and you descrided it well in your wrtiting. I actually envy your relationship with your cousin. Overall, your writing had guite a lot of examples how you two are so close together. I like it.
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ReplyDeleteMy favorite relative is my cousin Ji Yeon. Even though she's 10 years older than me, I feel like she's my real sister and also a best friend. The reason why I feel so close to her is that because I lived with her in childhood. Both of my parents had their job so I was raised in my aunt's house. I stayed at there Monday to Friday and my parents took me home in the weekends. Thus, I spent a lot of time with my aunt's family including my cousin Ji Yeon. Since our age gap was big, we never fought, but she treated me like a little sister that she needs to take care of. She changed my diapers, washed me and brought me to home when the kindergarten was finished. If I think back, she looked after me like a mother and still she always contacts me and takes care of me. Furthermore, she was an good advisor and a playmate. I really enjoyed telling her about my latest worries and thoughts about specific subjects. For instance, I only have a younger brother so it was hard for me to share my personal concerns with him. Although, with my cousin, we used to go to hot spa and spent a night at there chatting and talk about topic like celebrities' gossips. In addition, she always gave me an helpful advise to go through the difficult periods of my life. Now, she's married and has her own family so we cannot see each other that often like we used to in the past. However Ji Yeon is still my favorite cousin and my precious sister whom I rely a lot.