| A way to travel that interests me
Normally, people take trains, airplanes, or buses for traveling. But those transportations are just boring to me. The most attractive way to travel is traveling by a motor scooter. Most people think scooters are dangerous, but to me, scooter is the most amusing thing I've ever had in my life. Last year, when I went to jebudo with my friends, we rode 4-wheel motorscooters to travel all around the island. It's much better than a car because it's small so we can go into a narrow road easily. Also, we could feel the wind blowing towards us. It was in the middle of summer, so it felt refreshing. While traveling, we would stop for a moment and go inside the raw fish store and have a delicious meal of fresh raw fish. After that, we would ride the scooter and go to the beach and go inside the water for a bit. There was also mud so we also had a mud fight. The mud was soft and smelled okay so no one got hurt thankfully. Then again, we went to the jebu amusement park, it was small but we rode the viking and disco. We had ice creams while riding the scooter and we would stop anytime to watch the view of the blue ocean. I loved it and none of this would mean so much to me if we were traveling by a different transportation because you couldn't be able to feel the island itself. |
Thursday, April 5, 2012
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Hi, this is Park tae jun and I enjoyed reading your piece of writing! Your main point seemed that you took a motor rider to take a trip of the island. The sentence "But those transportations are just boring to me" struck me hard because it gave me a clear explanation why you took the motor rider. Althogh I liked your writing overall, it seems there are some sentences that are off of the topic. For instance, story about the amusement park doesn't have a clear connection of the theme "A way to travel". Enjoyed your writing!
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ReplyDeleteNormally, people take trains, airplanes, or buses for traveling. But those transportations are just boring to me. The most attractive way to travel is traveling by a motor scooter. Most people think scooters are dangerous, but to me, scooter is the most amusing thing I've ever had in my life. Last year, when I went to jebudo with my friends, we rode 4-wheel motorscooters to travel all around the island. It's much better than a car because it's small so we can go into a narrow road easily. Also, we could feel the wind blowing towards us. It was in the middle of summer, so it felt refreshing. While traveling, we would stop for a moment and go inside the raw fish store and have a delicious meal of fresh raw fish. After that, we would ride the scooter and go to the beach and go inside the water for a bit. There was also mud so we also had a mud fight. The mud was soft and smelled okay so no one got hurt thankfully. We had ice creams while riding the scooter and we would stop anytime to watch the view of the blue ocean. I loved it and none of this would mean so much to me if we were traveling by a different transportation because you couldn't be able to feel the island itself.