| I would like to write about a playground where I spent my youth lives. From 5 to 23, I had lived in an apartment in Seoul and infront of my apartment, there was a playground in which many children like to play with friends. Its size is as big as our classroom and it has many interest things like slides, swings, or seesaws. I remember sorts of senses I felt in the playground. When I played with the slide, I always heard strident sounds from the floor, as it's made of wood; and after taking swings, I used to feel the smell of iron in my palms as the swings were made of it. And as there is much send in the playground me and my friends used to take off shoes and felt the send. After I graduated the highschool, I stopped playing in the ground but I sometimes spent my times sitting on the wooden benches talking funniest things with my old friends, usually in midnight of summer, in a fresh breeze. As I moved a few years ago, I cannot spend my time in the playground anymore; but it still can be visualized apparently.
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Monday, April 2, 2012
Place / Kyeong-eun Lee / Mon34
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I enjoyed your discription. Especially the smell of iron touched my emotion. I have some precious memories which are related with the smell. But, this sentence is not necessary ; I remember sorts of senses I felt in the playground. It would be better if you delete this sentence. Your article was very good. I can get the feeling you wanted to give. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI would like to write about a playground where I spent my youth lives. From 5 to 23, I had lived in an apartment in Seoul and in front of my home, there was a playground in which many children like to play. Its size is as big as our classroom and it has many interest things like slides, swings, or seesaws. When I played with the slide, I always heard strident sounds from the floor, as it's made of wood; and after taking swings, I used to feel the smell of iron in my palms as the swings were made of it. And as there is much send in the playground me and my friends used to take off shoes and felt the send. After I graduated the highschool, I stopped playing in the ground but I sometimes spent my times sitting on the wooden benches talking funniest things with my old friends, usually in midnight of summer, in a fresh breeze. As I moved a few years ago, I cannot spend my time in the playground anymore; but it still can be visualized apparently.
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