Music lover
I am a music-loving person. I can not explain myself without saying music. For that much, music takes an important part of my life. There are several examples that proves my characteristic as a music lover. First of all, I played piano for a long time. I learned piano about 7 years when I was young. I wanted to learn more but I had to stop learning because I had to study for my high school. Even though I stopped going to the piano academy, I played the piano almost everyday. Whenever I had money, I bought music scores that I wanted to practice. Up until now, piano is my favorite instrument and it relieves my feelings when I got stressed out or I felt gloomy. Also, I love guitar very much. As soon as I finished my college entrance exam, I bought guitar. Since I had much free time at that period, I learned basic guitar techniques and spend most of my time practicing the guitar. When playing the guitar for the first time, my fingers really hurt that I want to give up. However I made an persistent efforts, callus formed in my fingers. Since then I could play it more easily and my fingers does not hurt any more. Now, I'm in a acoustic guitar club in HUFS, which is called noraenarae. I definitely love to share musical feelings and do band ensemble together. Lastly, of course, I love listening to various kinds of music. I especially like jazz, but I also listen rock, R&B, ballad, Hiphop, Folk, and many other genres too. Finding good songs and listen to it, and if I can, covering that song by piano or guitar gives me great pleasure. It makes me cheerful and energetic. Thanks to music, my life is much dynamic and happier.
Hi my name is NaYeon Kwon. What I like about your writing is that it has clear topic. I can see your interest and love towards music because there are many examples and details about it. However, I think you are trying too give too much information. I can see that you want to fully explain about your interst, but may be removing some sentences that are less relevant could be removed. In that way, I think it could be even more clear. Other than that, I enjoyed your writing. Thank you :)
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ReplyDeleteEvery Saturday, I usually go to public library near my house to borrow some books. To go to that library, I have to go through a quite big park. It is called 'Paris park'. As it has many amenities for people like good trails, basketball court, and variety of basic sporting goods, a lot of people visit there all the time especially on weekends. Most of all, in the center of the park, there is a big, silver colored fountain. It's bit old, but I feel it is still gorgeous. I think it's because of an un forgettable moment that I experienced around the fountain.
When I was about 8 years old, my father taught me how to ride a bike. Paris park has was a excellent place for me to learn and practice riding bike as it has wide square in it. I practiced and practiced again, but I failed in succession. So I tried to break my fear about riding bike without auxiliary wheel. Finally I did it! I can not forget the moment I succeeded in riding bike in front of the beautiful fountain in the park. That fountain emits different colors of lights and I can firmly remember those shiny colored waterfalls. I can also remember the feeling of fresh air brushed my cheeks. That memory is so strong that whenever I see the fountain I can always feel that bewitched feeling.
Above these, there are a lot of other valuable memories from Paris park. Although I have to move to another place in the future and can not visit there no more, I will always remember Paris park in my heart. It is the best place keeps my memories alive.
Music Lover
ReplyDeleteI am a music-loving person. I can not explain myself without saying music. For that much, music takes an important part of my life. There are several examples that proves my characteristic as a music lover. First of all, I played piano for a long time. I once had learned piano about 7 years when I was young. Even though I stopped going to the piano academy growing up, I played piano almost everyday. Whenever I had money, I bought music scores that I wanted to practice. Up until now, piano is my favorite instrument and it relieves my feelings when I got stressed out or I felt gloomy. Also, I love guitar very much. I absolutely love that soft and warm sound. So I started learning basic guitar techniques. When playing the guitar for the first time, my fingers really hurt that I want to give up. However I made an persistent efforts as I really aspire to play it well. As a result, callus formed in my fingers, I could play it more freely. Also now, I'm in a acoustic guitar club in HUFS, which is called noraenarae. We usually play acoustic music, and I definitely love to share musical feelings and do band ensemble together. Lastly, of course, I love listening to various kinds of music. I especially like jazz, but I also listen rock, R&B, ballad, Hiphop, Folk, and many other genres too. Finding good songs and listen to it, and if I can, covering that song by piano or guitar gives me great pleasure. It makes me cheerful and energetic. Thanks to music, my life is much dynamic and happier.