| < A Good Physician > I have a doctor whom I consider him my family's physician. He has run his hospital in an apartment complex where I had lived for more than 20 years. Why is he my family's physician? Because he is very kind to all of his patients, and it made him so familiar not only to my family but also to our neighbors that we think of him as our attending doctor. Then what is the specific feature that makes him special? It is kindness. Let me explain the examples. First of all, he remembers his patients' personal affairs. For instance, he did not forget which university I entered, and what my major is, so he always asks me like "Majoring economics is very tough, huh?" or "Have you joined in a club? It will help your university lives." Second, he feels sympathy with his patients. Actually, one of my cousins was very sick last year, and we took her to the doctor. My cousin was very worried about whether her illness would last long or not; noticing her worries, the doctor explained her exact states and his prospects about her illness. Thanks to the doctor, she got relieved – and it finally uncovered that her illness was not serious. Even though it was not serious, my cousin overcame the fear thanks to him. Last one, he is competent. One of the keys a physician has to have is the ability to heal the diseases. I used to be sick when I was 20. Whenever I have a fever, my mother took me to his hospital – and going back home, I gotten better soon. You may ask me didn't he use the amounts of antibiotics. I also used to check whether he uses much antibiotics or not, and it revealed that he us as least as possible. These three reasons are attracting me and my family members going forward to the hospital whenever we got sick. And we feel relieved to have such a kind and competent physician whom we can depend on.
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Friday, April 27, 2012
Kyeong-eun Lee / A Good Physician / Mon34
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Hello my name is NaYeon Kwon. I can see what a wonderful and kind doctor he is in your writing! You explained why you and your family like and trust the doctor giving enough examples. However, there isn't a sentence metionning that 'So this kind of a doctor is a physician who I think is a good doctor'. So I think it could have been better if it has a clearer topic and concluding sentence directly related to the topic. Other than that. I liked your writing and thank you :)
ReplyDeleteI have a doctor whom I consider him as my family's physician. He has run his hospital in an apartment complex for a long time. Why is he my family's physician? Because he is very kind to all of his patients, and it made him so familiar not only to my family but also to our neighbors that we think of him as our attending doctor. Then what is the specific feature that makes him special? It is kindness. Let me explain the examples. First of all, he remembers his patients' personal affairs. For instance, he does not forget which university I entered in, and what my major is, so he always asks me like "Majoring economics is very tough, huh?" or "Have you joined in any club? It will help your university lives." Second, he feels sympathy with his patients. Actually, one of my cousins was very sick last year, and we took her to the doctor. My cousin was very worried about whether her illness would last long or not; noticing her worries, the doctor explained her exact states and his prospects about her illness. Thanks to the doctor, she got relieved – and it finally revealed that her illness was not serious. Last one, he is competent. One of the keys a physician has to have is the ability to heal the diseases. I used to be sick when I was 20. Whenever I have a fever, my mother took me to his hospital; and I gotten better soon. You may ask me didn't he use the amounts of antibiotics. I also used to check whether he uses much antibiotics or not, and it revealed that he us as least as possible. These three reasons are attracting me and my family members going forward to the hospital whenever we got sick. And we feel relieved to have such a kind and competent physician whom we can depend on. The doctor is kind of standard physician who I think the other doctors should resemble.
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