| There are four rooms in my home and I like my room at most among them. The first thing you can see as soon as entering the home is my room. It is located on the right next to a bathroom. My room is as big as the half of the classroom that we are studying right now. The wallpaper is all white except one side. That special one is especially light green with classic patterns illustrated on. On the right side of the room, there is a bed which is queen size with purple covers. Also a white dressing table and a closet are placed in line next to the bed. On the left side of the room, meanwhile, there is a big brown desk where I usually do internet and study. I also have brown book shelf next to the desk. Its length is about as high as the ceiling so that I put nearly 100 books in it. If you stay in my room, you can hear different sounds over day. In daytime, you can hear giggling of children playing outside in the playground which is in the back of my home. However, at night, I hear the TV from the living room because I usually open the room door. In addition, there is a special scent of my room. I don't know exactly what it is, but I think it is from my own smell since everyone has their distinctive smell. I feel comfortable being in my room because it is where I can do everything I want. Therefore, I love my room! |
Thursday, April 5, 2012
Ji Eun Lee/ My favorite room/ Mon 11am
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Hello! I'm Song eun Ko :D!
ReplyDeleteNice to read your paragraph about your room.
It's so descriptive that I can imagine your room as if I take pictures of it. Wow! The location of the bed, desk, and closet is given fuller explanation. And you use some words like green, purple, giggling, scent, comfortable to show your affection toward the room.I like these points. Thank you!
The only place, my room (second draft)
ReplyDeleteThere are four rooms in my home and I like my room most. The first thing you can see as soon as entering the home is my room. It is located on the right next to the bathroom. My room is as big as the half of the classroom where we are studying right now. The wallpaper is all white except the one side. That special one is especially light green with classic patterns illustrated on. On the right side of the room, there is a bed which is queen size with purple covers. Also a white dressing table and a closet are placed in line next to the bed. On the left side of the room, meanwhile, there is a big brown desk where I usually do internet and study. I also have brown book shelf next to the desk. Its length is about as high as the ceiling so that I put nearly 100 books in it. If you stay in my room, you can hear different sounds over day. In daytime, you can hear giggling of children playing outside in the playground which is in the back of my home. At night, however, I hear the TV from the living room because I usually open the room door. In addition, there is a special scent of my room. I don’t know exactly what it is, but I think it is from my own smell since everyone has their distinctive smell. I feel comfortable being in my room because it is the only place where I can do everything I want. Therefore, I love my room.