Observer
I am an observer. I am not involved in a situation and just keep looking at it. For example, in a relationship with other people, I would never like to intrude on privacy of anyone and be intruded on mine. For this reason, I do not show my sincere feelings if possible. Thus, I have few friendships and spend most of my time alone. Another example, I cannot do something actively, because I feel uneasy when I have to deal with a situation that I have not finished to analyse yet. In fact, I would like to flee from being involved in situations that I cannot control. So, many people think I am shy, though, I am not. However, there are some virtues in my personality. I do not make a mistake so often owing to my cautiousness. I do something after I observe, study, and practice enough. This helps me handle any hard tasks without a mistake. That's why some people think I am competent without knowing my hidden struggle just like a noble swan. Also I can always keep calm in any negative circumstances, because I already checked probable outcomes and prepared to manage it. My life attitude has pros and cons. I will try to maximize the positive aspects of my personality and minimize the negative as a noble observer.
To Wonpil Lee
ReplyDeleteFrom Da-hyun Yang
Hi! It was nice to read your writing. The title 'observer' makes me interesting to read before I start reading your writing. And it was good to know pros and cons about your personality and I like the last sentence that you will going to maximize your positive aspects and minimize the negative aspects. Also there is a unity, I think. But I am not sure grammatically, but I think it would be natural if you change the phrase 'another example' to 'Another example is that ~'. Moreover it is good to compare you to a noble swan, but I can not understand exactly what you did want to describe.
Observer
ReplyDeleteI am an observer. I am not involved in a situation and just keep looking at it. For example, in a relationship with other people, I would never like to intrude on privacy of anyone and be intruded on mine. For this reason, I do not show my sincere feelings if possible. Thus, I have few friendships and spend most of my time alone. Another example is that I cannot do something actively, because I feel uneasy when I have to deal with a situation that I have not finished to analyse yet. In fact, I would like to flee from being involved in situations that I cannot control. So, many people think I am shy, though, I am not. However, there are some virtues in my personality. I do not make a mistake so often owing to my cautiousness. I do something after I observe, study, and practice enough. This helps me handle any hard tasks without a mistake. That's why some people think I am competent without knowing my hidden struggle just like a noble swan. Although people find the swan elegant and peaceful, she is actually struggling to float on the surface of the water, swinging her two legs. Also I can always keep calm in any negative circumstances, because I already checked probable outcomes and prepared to manage it. My life attitude has pros and cons. I will try to maximize the positive aspects of my personality and minimize the negative, as a noble observer.